It's understandable to be excited about your project and want to write all about every detail of it in your proposal. However, remember that the grant reviewer may have dozens or even hundreds of proposals to read. Make sure that your make your point clearly, succinctly, and early in your proposal. You want for your good idea to receive the attention it deserves, so make it easy for the reviewer to know exactly what you want to say.
-Chris
-Chris
